Tags
beauty, breath, breathing, bucolic, contemplation, haiku, mindfulness, nature, sunset
Ending, beginning
Sunset pours out golden light
Take a single breath
Day’s end -haiku
14 Sunday Jun 2015
The Write Idea
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14 Sunday Jun 2015
Tags
beauty, breath, breathing, bucolic, contemplation, haiku, mindfulness, nature, sunset
Ending, beginning
Sunset pours out golden light
Take a single breath
Gorgeous.
Very elegant, Bill. If you’re not committed to the 5-7-5 form, line 3 would work smoothly with line 2 as:
in single breaths
What do you think?
Ron