now 14 Wednesday Jun 2017 Posted by Bill Bisgood in ., Blogs I Like, Haiku, poem, Poetry, Thoughts ≈ 5 Comments Tagsgarden, gnats, haiku, moment, morning, nature, perection, sunlight morning dew on grass a small cloud of gnats dances this moment, perfect Share this:Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading...
Evocative scene
I see the dancing cloud and
the dew-laden grass.
I hadn’t intended to reply in haiku form, but the word count just serendipitously registered 17.
Evocative scene
I see the dancing cloud and
the dew-laden grass.
I hadn’t meant to reply in haiku form, but my sentence serendipitously fell into 17 syllables. I think it is taking over my sub conscious.
Evocative scene
I see the dancing cloud and
the dew-laden grass.
I hadn’t intended to reply in haiku form. Serendipitously the syllable count of my sentence was 17. This is becoming a sub-conscious act.
Evocative scene
I see the dancing cloud and
the dew-laden grass.
I hadn’t intended to reply in haiku form. 17 syllables is becoming a sub-conscious thing.
Have to start a group, recovering haiku slaves, there is no escape!