On enjoying a quiet moment
(Tanka)
Pale blue evening, stars
Venus and Jupiter shine
before moon rises.
A blackbird, the last songbird’s
sweet voice in the fading light.
Evening
23 Wednesday May 2018
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23 Wednesday May 2018
Lovely, and aren’t those planets bright!
We have very little light pollution, they are amazing,
I feel I am there.
If you can look up and see thes
them, you more or less are, the blackbird is a bonus 🐥 Glad you like it.
Now THAT is a tanka. Beautiful!
That is very kind of you, sometimes the words seem to write themselves 🌞
I would like to walk out into this evening. Lovely.
Be my guest, thank you 😊