sad, smile

11 Wednesday Jul 2018

Posted by Bill Bisgood in ., Blogs I Like, Haiku, poem, Poetry, Thoughts

≈ 8 Comments

Tags

haiku, people, poetry, sadness, smiles, stranger, tea

On noticing a stranger

There sits a sad soul
Permeated by lost dreams
A cup of tea; smiles

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8 thoughts on “sad, smile”

scooj said:

16/07/2018 at 00:55

Lovely observation. So difficult to do in 17 syllables. Great stuff.

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- Bill Bisgood said:
  
  16/07/2018 at 09:36
  
  Thank you, I enjoy people watching and collecting characters.
  
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- skat said:
  
  19/07/2018 at 00:06
  
  Well said, scooj; I agree.
  
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  - Bill Bisgood said:
    
    19/07/2018 at 07:59
    
    Thank you ☺️
Susi Bocks said:

16/07/2018 at 02:19

Feels like the facade of happiness.

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- Bill Bisgood said:
  
  16/07/2018 at 09:31
  
  Yes, she did look so forlorn.
  
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  - Susi Bocks said:
    
    16/07/2018 at 15:04
    
    😦
  - Bill Bisgood said:
    
    16/07/2018 at 15:42
    
    Perhaps the smile was the important piece.

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