Match 11 Thursday Apr 2019 Posted by Bill Bisgood in ., Blogs I Like, Haiku, poem, Poetry, Thoughts ≈ 15 Comments Tagseyes, haiku, people, poem, smile, weather On people he had not noticed her bright, decorated smile did not match her eyes Share this:Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Like Loading...
The Write Idea 
This is a portrait where the exact features don’t matter but is still totally revealing.
Thank you. I’m fitting this incident into a longer tale, couldn’t resist the haiku.
I’ll be looking forward to seeing it.
Oh, this is sad – at least that is how I read it. I see a bright smile trying to hide a sadness she is not willing to share. I would love to read your longer tale.
I’ll apply the pen and get on with it.
Great minds think alike! Or is it poetic minds? 😉
I was thinking the same thing, read yours soon after I’d posted and felt oddly guilty. Weird!
Hmm, cant wait to read the longer tail!
I’m getting there.
Ah! The wiles of incongruence. Wonderful, Bill.
Thanks, Don. ‘Wiles’ is such a full word.
Hooked … what happened next??
She didn’t tell me, but I’m working at it.
I want to read your longer story. I read duplicity in the woman’s eyes not matching her smile.
Duplicity, certainly. Or is it? (Smiles)